(一)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。
3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。
●审题概述●r
这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历；第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可；第三部分，提出建议。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness ○1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
○1Immoral behaviors in public ○2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ○3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of○1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ○2implementation and ○3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ○1shares the huge responsibility of ○2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路点评：
作文要求第一点，相关经历
◇语言点提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：直接点题
◇第二段思路点评：
不文明行为的影响
◇语言点提示：
○1 immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接
○2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动”
○3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感”
◇第三段思路点评：
如何改善这些现象
◇语言点提示：
○1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文衔接，且避免重复
○2implementation：意为“执行，实施”
○3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率”
④ common good：意为“公益”
◇第四段思路点评：
总结
◇语言点提示：
○1share a huge responsibility:意为“承担重大责任”
○2demonstrate：意为“展现”
(二)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展；
2.发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德；
3.你的观点。
●审题概述●r
这是一篇议论文，题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。根据提示，可分为三部分：年轻人的个性发展，可以适当举例；个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德，可以笼统地讲，也可以具体地解释某一种美德；最后提出自己的观点。
【范文】
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is ○1overstated by young people these days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their ○1forefathers were proud. Take the question of ○2fidelity to elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes ○3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues ○1have nothing to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will improve your own character.
◇第一段思路点评：
个性的发展
◇语言点提示：
○1overstate：意为“夸大”
◇第二段思路点评：
个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德
◇语言点提示：
○1forefather：意为“祖先”
○2fidelity：意为“忠实，忠诚”
○3turn one’s back on：意为“背弃，抛弃”
◇第三段思路点评：
个人观点
◇语言点提示：
○1have nothing to do with：意为“与……无关”
